Trouble when editing

We edited our opening title sequence well but it is not long enough and it does not make much sense. We have decided to reshoot and add more voice overs to make it clear that they are coming from school to uni. Also, props included will now include a year photo when the girl character sticks it on the wall as well as certificates from school. The main guy character will have more dialogue too and we will make sure this time that we will get a boy actor.

Addition to our script

In our opening title sequence we found it needed a little more dialogue to cut confusion of the ending when it goes into the past. Our script will be by the main girl: 'Ahh some good memories' when putting the photos in the album. 'When the photograph of the lockers is shown she will say 'Oh My god, Doug do you remember when you use to bully me!?'

Pictures of settings

The first photo is of the lockers which we used for the ending of our opening title sequence.

The second photo was our main location as we used it for most of our opening title sequence. Also, it is small and plain like a dorm room.